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A Whopping Wad of Winning Words



The world is chock-full of words. By most accounts, the English language contains well over a million words when slang, technical terms, and neologisms (newly invented words) are included. When I was a kid, I was fascinated by an enormous dictionary that my mother kept on a wooden stand to showcase its importance. It was filled with the most amazing words. From the front cover to the back, the tome was about twelve inches thick and thousands of pages. Within its sturdy spine lived short words, long words, words to tickle your funny bone, solemn words, antiquated words, common words, words with pizzazz, obscure words, fancy words, inspiring words, and words that have fallen off the grid entirely.



Whenever I asked my mother the meaning of a word or how to spell a word, she would direct me to her prized dictionary. As a child in elementary school, the teacher tasked my class with an interesting homework assignment. The next day we were to come prepared with a new and different word to share with the class. It was the perfect opportunity to scour the humungous lexicon for just the right word. I longed for one that was not yet in my vocabulary, a smooth-sounding and captivating word to impress my classmates. I randomly opened the book and landed on a page of L words. I closed my eyes and pointed. Boom, my finger touched down on the most fantastic word, ta-da, — loquacious – an adjective meaning talkative, but it sounded so much better than the dull talkative.



That’s the day I fell in love with words.



Why am I telling you all of this? Because choosing the right words for your story is just as crucial as ditching busy words. I want you to fall in love with the written word, fall in love with phrases, terms, designations, and descriptive language. I want you to fall in love with your manuscript enough to compose your scenes with words that suite your story. While simple is usually best for most narratives, I say, if a word fits consider using it.

 

I’m working on a fantasy novel with characters like fairies, shape-shifters, and other alien beings so words, phrases, and jargon that fit that genre and setting such as merry morning, halloo, mayhaps, cosmic shenanigans, galactic travel, elixir, teleportation, kerseymere, doldrums, maidenhair, and vespertine hour are some of the ones I chose.



Since so many possibilities of words exist, for so many genres, settings, and characters, for the purpose of this article we will break it down by seasons. Use these words to get started and let them spark creativity.


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Whether you’re writing a holiday romance, a winter tale, or adding a few scenes to mark the passage of time in your novel, Wordy has a plethora of winter words to choose from. As long as you don’t go overboard or use a ton of clichés, these can add depth, richness, and a fresh spark to otherwise dull prose.


icy

tundra

biting cold

frostbite

numb fingers and toes

icy chill

exhale a breath of frosty air

snuggle

runny nose

grey sky

inky sky

bare trees

frosty

winter wonderland

icicles

blanket of snow

frozen

arctic wind

freezing

iridescent snowflakes

white powder

snowball fight

shoveling

winter blues

the sweet scent of Christmas cookies

Christmas

snowball fights

Chanukah

snow flurries

colorful lights

snowman

hibernation

snowballs

patch of snow

igloo

Valentine’s Day

blizzard conditions

starry night

snow squall

glowing full moon

snowy sky

fierce winds

snowboarding

blizzard conditions

ice-skating

cold and flu season

arctic air

food that sticks to your ribs

cold that settles in bones

hot buttered rum

shivering

sleighride punch

sloshing

jingle bells


If you’re stuck with the winter writing blues and looking to spring ahead, reflect on the words below and choose the best ones to integrate into your narrative. Telling the reader that it’s spring is boring and so fifth grade, instead, dazzle readers with words that transport them into the passage. Don’t be afraid to mix and match words and phrases to express your thoughts.

April showers

bees

blossoms

sunny

bloom

transformation

spring fever

reawakening

spring break

rejuvenating

butterflies

Easter  ~  Easter bunny ~  Easter eggs

metamorphosis

nesting birds

dragonflies

days get longer

fireflies

nights get shorter

spring ahead

mild temperatures

vernal

setting sun

verdant

harmonious

plant a garden

spring scents

buds

frondescent

crocus

honeysuckle

sprout

fledgling flowers

spring fling

flower power

gentle zephyr

flower petals

spring rain

springtime

balmy breeze

new birth

raincoat

efflorescent

new beginnings

fragrant

renewal

flourishing

pollen

ambrosial

umbrella

burgeoning

puddles

picturesque

rainbow

incalescent spring evenings

planting

spring allergies

vegetable garden

hay fever

seeds

birdsong

ladybugs

kitten season


Ready to get your tan on and segue into summer fun and sun? Review the list of descriptive summer words below and do your best to bewitch readers as they devour your story. Don't forget the five senses. Make sure they feel the heat, savor the tastes, hear the crickets and creatures, see the colorful blooms, and get a whiff of suntan lotion or burgers sizzling on the grill.

frozen cocktails

sand and sun

turquoise water

sand squished between toes

seashells

beach blanket

barbeques

tan skin

sizzling steaks

bikini days

humid

sunburn

flip-flops

tan skin

the slapping sound of flip-flops

lounge chair

heatwave

heatstroke

sweat on upper lip

salty air

a cocktail with a little umbrella

sea breeze

hotdogs

scorching hot

juicy hamburgers

blazing sun

grill

splashing

crickets chirping

sun and fun

frogs croaking

fun in the sun

long summer walks

ripe August tomato

the scent of suntan lotion

clambake

beach days

fireworks

serenity

hurricane season

summer romance

poolside cocktails

Independence Day

chatting poolside

beach waves

outdoor concerts

surfs up

sprinkler fun

hanging ten

ocean breeze

the taste of salt on your lips

summer wind


Onward and upward to the changing leaves of autumn. It’s time to savor the final warm days of summer and pivot to the season that ushers in cooler air. Dive into the descriptive list below to create a picturesque scene of autumn beauty. Deliver readers straight into the passage by letting them take a brisk walk with your character who is dressed in a jacket and boots. Show them fallen leaves of gold and crimson that scatter lawns and sidewalks or convey the crunching sound of brown and brittle leaves that crunch beneath your character’s feet.

back to school

fireside chats

fall fashion

crescent moon

sweater whether

harvest moon

warm cider

pumpkins

firepit

everything pumpkin

golden sky

pumpkin spice

root vegetables

pumpkin pie

autumnal

hooting owl

chilly

screech owl

chestnuts

Halloween

gold and crimson leaves

spooky

apple picking

eerie

apple crisp

cozy

apple pie

witches

fall foliage

Witches’ brew

hot cocoa

jack-o-lantern

nippy

Trick-or-treat

butternut squash

Thanksgiving

flannel shirt

turkey

autumn colors

all the sides

candy apples

brisk air

scarlet

crisp air

s’mores

brisk walk

harvest

mittens

hot apple cider

blazer

crockpot meals

hoodie

hiking weather

earmuffs

someone lit a fire

Fall soups

  

There are so many more descriptive words and phrases to describe the seasons. See how many you can come up with. Try combining some of the above words or using them in character dialogue. Whatever genre you’re writing in, make a list or words associated with that genre that you’d like to include. Writing a romance? Feel the love with a compilation of passionate and sexy words. Doing this can keep you on track and focused. Consider creating a list of words for characters and settings as well. For example, if one of your characters is from the south, research jargon from that area and add it to the list. If your story is set in the 1920s, compose a list of the lingo from that time. You get the idea. Write and have fun!



 

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Hi. I'm Liz Ambrico, freelance proofreader and aspiring author. I too am querying agents, editors, and publishers in hopes of becoming a published author.

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